I am having trouble constructing my thesis. How can I put all my thoughts into one sentence?
I feel like I am comparing the two works instead of analyzing them. How could I keep on track?

1st blog

So this is for English class and I'm not sure what to write so I'll write about myself. I'm 21 years old and I feel like I'm never gonna get out of college. My life is kinda boring. I really just to go school and work. I'm ready to graduate and start my life. I want to move to somewhere most exciting with more things to do. I would like to live in Texas or Georgia. I prefer to stay in the south since I was raised here. My degree is in criminal justice and I hope to be able to do something with it one day like become a police officer or prison guard. People doubt me because I don't have the build to be an officer but I think with my determination and discipline that I can do anything I want. I don't want a family anytime soon if ever so I'm prepared to move around a lot. Right now I'm just spinning my wheels in Hattiesburg because I never have anything fun to do. I watch a lot of tv like Grey's Anatomy and Will & Grace. I don't have a boyfriend by choice and really haven't found anybody that can keep my attention for more than a week or so. I like to listen to pretty much any kind of music but I mostly like alternative rock. I'm not sure how long this should be but I think this is enough especially since I can't think of anything interesting to write..